So, I just published about 3 parts of this story I’m doing. It’s a fantasy/sci-fi story about a girl who works at a Transmigration company and possess the bodies of men and women who were manipulated into tragic fates by evil people. She works to reverse their fates and deliver vengeance against the scum bags and bitches who deserve it. Can someone review it for me? Tell me if grammar errors and such?

https://www.penana.com/story/87858/returning-the-favor-to-scumbags-of-the-world