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幻想中的狐狸
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書名:花語書
類型:戀愛、犯罪、懸疑?
披著戀愛外皮的犯罪小說
希望大家來看,並且歡迎大家留言喔,多多給我意見,謝謝
網址:https://m.penana.com/story.php?id=78481&from=searchpage
3 years ago
ʚ ᴍɪs ɞ
@Chloe , 看到了一半,第一章有給建議,不過也僅僅是我的建議而已⋯⋯
3 years ago
幻想中的狐狸
@Mis, 我有去看你的「這位同學的守護靈很強大」。
我能明白你給的建議,排版的確是影響讀者的重要因素。
3 years ago
ʚ ᴍɪs ɞ
@Chloe , 啊啊⋯⋯被看了(害羞(?))
排版真的會影響讀者願意觀看的慾望呢!
不過我的文筆還沒有那麼好(´▽`)
所以就不會文筆上給予建議
3 years ago
幻想中的狐狸
@Mis, 我覺得你的文筆很不錯啊
我就沒辦法給人意見了,因為我自己就是新人🤣,文筆有待加強。
有任何想法都可以跟我說喔,這樣我才會進步😊
3 years ago
ʚ ᴍɪs ɞ
@Chloe , 如果想要加強文筆的話,可以多看看其他大大們的小說喔(就是我現在在做的事情),
可以一邊看到好作品,同時也可以交到很多朋友
3 years ago
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類型:戀愛、犯罪、懸疑?
披著戀愛外皮的犯罪小說
希望大家來看,並且歡迎大家留言喔,多多給我意見,謝謝
網址:https://m.penana.com/story.php?id=78481&from=searchpage
我能明白你給的建議,排版的確是影響讀者的重要因素。
排版真的會影響讀者願意觀看的慾望呢!
不過我的文筆還沒有那麼好(´▽`)
所以就不會文筆上給予建議
我就沒辦法給人意見了,因為我自己就是新人🤣,文筆有待加強。
有任何想法都可以跟我說喔,這樣我才會進步😊
可以一邊看到好作品,同時也可以交到很多朋友