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S·Y炎麟
#6
你的小說點子很好,在對話方面的話有些欠缺,另外如很樓上的人所說,光是看到沒句號,就讓人強迫症發作了。所以必要時刻,還是放上句號,免得人家以為你還有東西要寫,結果卻沒有。🤗加油哦
3 years ago
toto
@S·Y炎麟, 謝謝指導,這方面我還在努力,新手作家能得到你們的意見非常感謝
3 years ago
S·Y炎麟
@toto , 我也算新手啦,我是去年才重新寫小說的,現在倒是只經營劇本那類的。
3 years ago
toto
@S·Y炎麟, 也算前輩啦哈哈
3 years ago
S·Y炎麟
@toto , 有問題的話你可以找我,我關注你
3 years ago
toto
@S·Y炎麟, 謝謝關注~
3 years ago
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