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是我寫的小說不能抓住讀者的心嗎?求建議TAT
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咖撒
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我懷疑是我這種題材的小說不合讀者胃口,還是文筆上、劇情上夠深刻嗎?或者說步調慢等種原因
求建議,目前更新至第四章。
https://www.penana.com/story/75523/%E5%9B%A0%E7%82%BA%E5%A4%A2%E5%B1%95%E9%96%8B%E7%9A%84%E9%80%9A%E9%9D%88%E6%97%A5%E5%B8%B8/
3 years ago
Dark Angel
@咖撒, 嗯... 我看過還好...但是沒有太大吸引我繼續去看..,不過因為我對這類型不太有興趣,所以你不用灰心。
還有就是...讀者可能要慢慢累積,未必一時之間會有太多人看你的作品,亦都是乎你什麼時候更新。不妨在這裏與其他作者或讀者溝通,或許有新的靈感,也令到更多人閱讀你的作品。
3 years ago
Historia
@咖撒, 文筆當然還能夠精進。
就說我在意的點(個人想法)
該怎麼說呢,我自己非常習慣看「全形的標點符號」,所以第一眼看到沒有句點就直接放棄閱讀。
另外,舉第一篇開頭,眼睛睜開看到雲。
如果能夠更具體描述主角四周景色或許會讓讀者更有畫面感,比起主角說話會更有說服力。
大概就這樣 :D
3 years ago
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求建議,目前更新至第四章。
https://www.penana.com/story/75523/%E5%9B%A0%E7%82%BA%E5%A4%A2%E5%B1%95%E9%96%8B%E7%9A%84%E9%80%9A%E9%9D%88%E6%97%A5%E5%B8%B8/
還有就是...讀者可能要慢慢累積,未必一時之間會有太多人看你的作品,亦都是乎你什麼時候更新。不妨在這裏與其他作者或讀者溝通,或許有新的靈感,也令到更多人閱讀你的作品。
就說我在意的點(個人想法)
該怎麼說呢,我自己非常習慣看「全形的標點符號」,所以第一眼看到沒有句點就直接放棄閱讀。
另外,舉第一篇開頭,眼睛睜開看到雲。
如果能夠更具體描述主角四周景色或許會讓讀者更有畫面感,比起主角說話會更有說服力。
大概就這樣 :D