Alright, here goes **spoiler** (to whoever is reading Glory) hahaha
So the story is, the lead character recently received some sort of ritual to bring out a second personality out of her (this was supposed to be the reveal of the recent chapter) now I have to go and write the story of the one who did this ritual because the lead character will now appear as a different personality (that's supposed to be a reveal for this current chapter) but at the same time, I don;t want to give this ritual-giver a First person perspective. I want to keep my readers in the dark about his motivations. So I need to use Third Person on his story so we do not directly go in his mind.
So there. That's the issue. And I think it's alright to do the sudden shift? I'll just have to lessen the frequency.
@Alef Magnus, I don't know about great, but it's "doing" haha. I'm about to post the rest of Chapter 2, and then I'll continue on. I'm actually finding th writing itself fairly smooth, its just the sitting down and being motivated that's tricky
So the story is, the lead character recently received some sort of ritual to bring out a second personality out of her (this was supposed to be the reveal of the recent chapter) now I have to go and write the story of the one who did this ritual because the lead character will now appear as a different personality (that's supposed to be a reveal for this current chapter) but at the same time, I don;t want to give this ritual-giver a First person perspective. I want to keep my readers in the dark about his motivations. So I need to use Third Person on his story so we do not directly go in his mind.
So there. That's the issue. And I think it's alright to do the sudden shift? I'll just have to lessen the frequency.