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Alejandro Gustavo Sanchez

#93

Rhivera
Dystopian/Science Fiction

In the past the country of Rhivera was plagued by famine. The government formed the Population Control Council to keep such a catastrophe from repeating itself. Those deemed weakest by Population Control are eliminated to keep the population at their desired level.

Like all children, Juaquin, Melissa, and Arturo were taught that Population Control is in the right. But when Population Control changes each of their lives irreversibly, their beliefs are shaken. They become part of a conflict which will profoundly change Rhivera forever.

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3 years ago

T. S. Stone

@Alejandro Gustavo Sanchez, Whoa, that sounds amazing, dude. I just have one suggestion about the way you wrote the summary of your story. You should try giving two or three bullet points about what actually happens in the story instead of leaving it up to the reader to assume what the story is even about. Only telling about the conflict still leaves a massive gap of information that readers don't know about and this can cause some readers to quickly look away from the story, not giving it much though. Your story does sound very, very interesting and I hope you get lot of readers on it.

3 years ago

Alejandro Gustavo Sanchez

@T. S. Stone, thanks! And I probably could provide more information, but I also don’t want to give too much away. But there certainly is a way to balance that out. The book is on here and Wattpad currently, feel free to take a look

3 years ago

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