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朱諾(Juno)
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我覺得比起劇情慢,一直節外生枝比較不好。重點是要透過衝突留下懸念讓大家想要閱讀。
4 years ago
愚者
@朱諾(Juno), 能不能舉一個衝突的例子?
4 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@愚者, 哈姆雷特 to be or not to be
自刎,還是活下去?
死後便一生輕,不必面對凡塵的苦楚和凌辱。
但出於對未知(死亡)的恐懼,對於死後世界的不確定,人們往往躊躇不前。他們寧可繼續承擔人間的重擔,也不願飛往另一個淵藪,也減弱了自刎的勇氣與決心。
最後,哈姆雷特選擇挺身對抗,放棄一走了之。
這是心理層面的衝突,也可以是非常直觀的那種
主角陷入要選小三還是正宮的兩難
其實我有個教學網誌,提供寫小說的方法,之後應該會講到,看你要不要參考
4 years ago
愚者
@朱諾(Juno), 謝謝你的例子
4 years ago
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自刎,還是活下去?
死後便一生輕,不必面對凡塵的苦楚和凌辱。
但出於對未知(死亡)的恐懼,對於死後世界的不確定,人們往往躊躇不前。他們寧可繼續承擔人間的重擔,也不願飛往另一個淵藪,也減弱了自刎的勇氣與決心。
最後,哈姆雷特選擇挺身對抗,放棄一走了之。
這是心理層面的衝突,也可以是非常直觀的那種
主角陷入要選小三還是正宮的兩難
其實我有個教學網誌,提供寫小說的方法,之後應該會講到,看你要不要參考