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無鳶
#1
自己在寫文章的時候,寫的叙述比較多。
後來被人說人物對話再多一點會比較好,可是如果改成對話多一點的話,整個劇情會變得很跳。
所以、誰能教我怎麼寫人物對話,劇情又不會跳啊qq。
4 years ago
穹葉
一對話就跳痛:瞎聊。
當角色不需要對話時,不要勉強他們講話!甚至,很多對話其實可以用旁白帶過的,這個完全視「當下的劇情」判斷是否有出對話的必要性。如果是過度場景,旁白帶過就好,於我而言,出對白就是「鏡頭慢下來」,會去特寫角色(表情、動作、心態),通常會是「一段必須出現的劇情」。
當然,如果你寫的是日常……那只能用對白撐場面了。
(話說不要因為部分人的意見去改變自己的習慣,你的問題並不是一件錯誤)
如果旁白描述太多而顯得枯燥,請適時且適當的添加角色心理活動,這樣或許會好一些的。(必須對症下藥,沒辦法說清的)
4 years ago
無鳶
@葉墨生花❈穹葉, 原來如此,謝謝您的建議!這對我來說非常有幫助,謝謝!
4 years ago
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後來被人說人物對話再多一點會比較好,可是如果改成對話多一點的話,整個劇情會變得很跳。
所以、誰能教我怎麼寫人物對話,劇情又不會跳啊qq。
當角色不需要對話時,不要勉強他們講話!甚至,很多對話其實可以用旁白帶過的,這個完全視「當下的劇情」判斷是否有出對話的必要性。如果是過度場景,旁白帶過就好,於我而言,出對白就是「鏡頭慢下來」,會去特寫角色(表情、動作、心態),通常會是「一段必須出現的劇情」。
當然,如果你寫的是日常……那只能用對白撐場面了。
(話說不要因為部分人的意見去改變自己的習慣,你的問題並不是一件錯誤)
如果旁白描述太多而顯得枯燥,請適時且適當的添加角色心理活動,這樣或許會好一些的。(必須對症下藥,沒辦法說清的)