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奇幻小說的戰鬥畫面怎麼描述?
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生若虎
#7
我是先想寫一些在本次戰鬥過程要表達的重點畫面或情節(帶動劇情或突顯角色)
再把過程、構圖、運鏡補完,將整個戰鬥流程模擬一次
我認為不是為戰鬥而戰鬥,每次戰鬥都有其目標、要表達的訊息、要帶出的角色
將那些核心畫面記下,描寫其動作和畫面更為重要
4 years ago
夜魂
@生若虎, 你給的建議很詳細,我會思考怎麼將這些元素加入我的戰鬥畫面,你也有參加「連儂牆」的創挑啊?
4 years ago
生若虎
@夜魂, 哈哈,純粹分享一下個人寫時的流程,我覺得重點還是核心畫面帶來的震撼感與劇情推進(參考了看漫畫時的感覺)
有啊~~你對「連儂牆」的感覺如何?
4 years ago
夜魂
@生若虎, 我也有參加哦~
4 years ago
生若虎
@夜魂, 感謝支持和體諒,因為我看到台灣也有反紅媒活動…
4 years ago
夜魂
@生若虎, 台灣最近不停報韓國瑜,我都不想打開電視了😅
4 years ago
生若虎
@夜魂, 咦,不是因為林鄭的助攻,導致蔡英文民望升了嗎?
4 years ago
夜魂
@生若虎, 我不是很確定,林鄭有沒有助攻蔡英文,但是真的每一天都有韓國瑜,連關於香港的新聞變很少。
4 years ago
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再把過程、構圖、運鏡補完,將整個戰鬥流程模擬一次
我認為不是為戰鬥而戰鬥,每次戰鬥都有其目標、要表達的訊息、要帶出的角色
將那些核心畫面記下,描寫其動作和畫面更為重要
有啊~~你對「連儂牆」的感覺如何?