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奇幻小說的戰鬥畫面怎麼描述?
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毛鼠之之
#4
我是會想像打鬥的情節,以及雙方的內心在想什麼,然後帶動全部的畫面?((最近才剛開始練習,先分享這樣的心得QWQ
4 years ago
夜魂
@毛鼠之之, 透過你寫的小說,我也可以感受到你的描述,大多是寫內心世界,你平常是會在心裡OS小劇場的嗎?然後謝謝你給我的意見哦~
4 years ago
毛鼠之之
@夜魂, 咦?你是看月神那部嗎?
哈哈算是,不過最後都會有個結論,不然會人格分裂呢😂
是覺得寫這樣比較能讓讀者了解這個角色的性格,總是打來打去太無聊了😅😅
4 years ago
夜魂
@毛鼠之之, 對啊,你這樣寫也蠻有特色的,不過能多加一點對話會更好哦~對我來說啦~
4 years ago
毛鼠之之
@夜魂, 哈哈謝謝指教XD我會在後面多加一些~還是希望有幫到你啦
4 years ago
夜魂
@毛鼠之之, 有幫助我哦~
4 years ago
生若虎
看之之大大分享,獲益良多XD
4 years ago
毛鼠之之
@夜魂, 加油OWO
4 years ago
毛鼠之之
@生若虎, 你比較厲害吧QWQ超詳細的耶
4 years ago
夜魂
@毛鼠之之, 你也加油!
4 years ago
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哈哈算是,不過最後都會有個結論,不然會人格分裂呢😂
是覺得寫這樣比較能讓讀者了解這個角色的性格,總是打來打去太無聊了😅😅