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奇幻小說的戰鬥畫面怎麼描述?
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橘子樂園
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唔⋯⋯我是影像向,就大概描述想到的畫面。但是中間要平衡描述的側重點,例如痛楚的面容和受擊的位置,中間也要插入氣氛(背景)的描述和聲音讓人容易聯想⋯⋯大約想到這麼多
4 years ago
夜魂
@橘子樂園, 好像可以欸,我會用這種方式寫寫看~
4 years ago
橘子樂園
@夜魂, 有幫助就好
4 years ago
夜魂
@橘子樂園, 謝謝你~
4 years ago
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