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奇幻小說的戰鬥畫面怎麼描述?
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夜魂
#1
奇幻小說最精彩的就是戰鬥場面,要怎麼描述才有熱血沸騰的感覺呢?比如說魔法師的對決或武者之間的對決。有人可以在這裡寫寫看嗎?或是具備哪些要素才能讓人有感覺呢?
5 years ago
千夢Dream
@夜魂, 我覺得除了背景音效等文字敘述外,可以再描寫人和物的一些變化,如:瞳孔、表情、情緒、呼吸、天氣等等肢體表達與周圍變化。夜魂大大可以試試在腦中構思你所希望的戰鬥畫面,想像那時的急促、戰兢等等,再用文字敘述出來。這只是我的一點想法啦,希望對大大有幫主>^_^<
4 years ago
千夢Dream
@千夢Dream, 還有,要對自己構思出來的人物特別了解,不是以自己要怎麼樣,而是您所創造出來的"人物"會怎麼樣,讀者也不太容易猜到結果(/◕ヮ◕)/
4 years ago
夜魂
@千夢Dream, 謝謝你的建議,我會嘗試的~
4 years ago
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