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Can someone review my story

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It's the first story i have on here and just wrote the first issue yesterday, could anybody take a look at it?

5 年前

Hey man, of course! I'll give it a look right now. I'll leave a brief comment on some thoughts and PM you on anything bigger.

5 年前

@ViridianMind, thanks!😀

5 年前

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