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大家喜歡都市亂武這題材嗎?(>_<)
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律希
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以我個人看法的話,就是故事的世界有一點不明確,還有口語和書面語也有混合,這方面大概可以改善吧(?)
8 years ago
藍渡
@律希, 口語其實只會在說話中出現,即係我是故意的,因為我個人認為說話時說書面語有些怪怪的,不過我也已經改回書面語了,謝謝( ´▽` )ノ
可指明故事世界哪裡有不明確嗎?
8 years ago
律希
@藍渡, 雖然簡介中有寫打開了平行時空,但兩邊世界和人種也沒有特定的名字(?)
然後也不太清楚到底主角是這邊還是那邊...
或是我的理解力不太好的問題(?)
8 years ago
藍渡
@律希, 用得被侵入男主當然是這邊啦XD,但其實之後一些對話有說明兩邊人互相如何稱呼的,如果你想知我先答你,被入侵=要塞人,入侵者=異界人 ( ´▽` )ノ
8 years ago
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可指明故事世界哪裡有不明確嗎?
然後也不太清楚到底主角是這邊還是那邊...
或是我的理解力不太好的問題(?)