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湯加群島
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請問,可不可以請你看看我的作品「廣東歌短故事」?
但當中有點會用到廣東話和廣東歌,而且不知算不算是二創(如果是的話不看也沒所謂)
有些張節已經過了很久了,所以有些是我現在不太滿意的而且想重寫…
不過也想有第三者給它一點意見,希望可以有所改進。
6 years ago
滄藍
對不起,徵書的條件忘了寫我看不懂廣東話(跪
如果比例不高的話,我還是會去看看的,抱歉orz
6 years ago
湯加群島
好的,不要緊
6 years ago
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@湯加群島, 讀完了,也留言囉。雖然沒什麼給到建議QQ
6 years ago
湯加群島
@滄藍, 謝謝你!沒給到建議也不要緊,有人讀得懂我已很高興了
6 years ago
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@湯加群島, 別客氣!
6 years ago
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但當中有點會用到廣東話和廣東歌,而且不知算不算是二創(如果是的話不看也沒所謂)
有些張節已經過了很久了,所以有些是我現在不太滿意的而且想重寫…
不過也想有第三者給它一點意見,希望可以有所改進。
如果比例不高的話,我還是會去看看的,抱歉orz