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亞格斯
#10
麻煩你了,小弟想推一下劣作《女神戰爭》。
勞煩評論一下劇情、人物、描述。
小弟第一次寫作,需要磨練一下,麻煩你了。
https://www.penana.com/story/15300/%E5%A5%B3%E7%A5%9E%E6%88%B0%E7%88%AD/toc
序:
女神和人類有着不可分割的牽絆。本應互相依靠的兩者,因傲慢而互相殘殺。主角亞格斯於十七年前的一次事件中,被意外捲進女神們的戰爭中。他被迫選擇其一,為世界決定了命運。
亞格斯踏上尋找自己的神裔血統之路,誓要手刃殺親仇人,擊倒與他為敵的女神。
在他復仇的過程中,信任被多少次背叛,友情被多少次考驗。
被命運捉弄的孩子,在亂世中能夠找到救贖嗎?
作為新世界的代價,犧牲在所難免。
6 years ago
滄藍
@空想亞格斯, 評論不敢當啦,不過我可以回回我的心得或是聊天串個門子(?)這樣XD
6 years ago
亞格斯
@滄藍, 前輩的心得我會虛心學習的~請狠評~~~謝謝你噢。
6 years ago
滄藍
@空想亞格斯, 已讀上進度,也留言給你囉~
6 years ago
亞格斯
@滄藍, 很感謝前輩,留言確實接收了~很高興前輩這麼用心評閲劣作😊
6 years ago
滄藍
@空想亞格斯, 根本沒有到劣啦XDDDDD 別客氣,請繼續加油~
6 years ago
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勞煩評論一下劇情、人物、描述。
小弟第一次寫作,需要磨練一下,麻煩你了。
https://www.penana.com/story/15300/%E5%A5%B3%E7%A5%9E%E6%88%B0%E7%88%AD/toc
序:
女神和人類有着不可分割的牽絆。本應互相依靠的兩者,因傲慢而互相殘殺。主角亞格斯於十七年前的一次事件中,被意外捲進女神們的戰爭中。他被迫選擇其一,為世界決定了命運。
亞格斯踏上尋找自己的神裔血統之路,誓要手刃殺親仇人,擊倒與他為敵的女神。
在他復仇的過程中,信任被多少次背叛,友情被多少次考驗。
被命運捉弄的孩子,在亂世中能夠找到救贖嗎?
作為新世界的代價,犧牲在所難免。