Hello to you Jennifer I have just left a comment on your story, its a rather cute story of love and war. You could possibly spin the idea around and build apon it a bit more, your grammar needs a lot of improvement but for a simple childlike story its ok.
Would you like to get in touch? Do you like Zootopia I am writing a nice story in it and I would love to hear what you think.
Thank you very much! I am not good at grammar and it is difficult for me because Chinese does not have lot of grammar. I like Zootopia and I will go to read your story, but just give me some time. You know, my english......
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Would you like to get in touch? Do you like Zootopia I am writing a nice story in it and I would love to hear what you think.