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聖賢
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能自我宣傳?
https://www.penana.com/story/7784/%E5%B9%BB%E6%B3%95%E5%B0%87%E6%98%9F%E7%B7%A3/issue/1
幻法將星緣
6 years ago
江山美人我都要
@聖賢,
嗨!剛剛看了你的文。
我認為你似乎並不是個剛提起筆寫文的人,文句順,劇情也順。(以下無任何惡意。
我是個看文看得很快的人,常常會在你的文裡面「卡住」,但是細看你的文確是順的,其實你的文感覺少了些什麼,多了些什麼不必要的地方的感覺。我還挺喜歡劇情部分,今後繼續加油吧!
額,另外一點,我是認為如果沒有任何人按贊或是留言並不是那麼重要哈哈,在這個圈子除非你是曠世奇才:)否則就是很多朋友,不然大家按的讚其實是很少的哈哈哈。
6 years ago
聖賢
@江山美人我都要,
/_\, 可是偶覺得委壬要的說...
5555555..........
要多來看, 多點, 多回文誒.
6 years ago
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https://www.penana.com/story/7784/%E5%B9%BB%E6%B3%95%E5%B0%87%E6%98%9F%E7%B7%A3/issue/1
幻法將星緣
嗨!剛剛看了你的文。
我認為你似乎並不是個剛提起筆寫文的人,文句順,劇情也順。(以下無任何惡意。
我是個看文看得很快的人,常常會在你的文裡面「卡住」,但是細看你的文確是順的,其實你的文感覺少了些什麼,多了些什麼不必要的地方的感覺。我還挺喜歡劇情部分,今後繼續加油吧!
額,另外一點,我是認為如果沒有任何人按贊或是留言並不是那麼重要哈哈,在這個圈子除非你是曠世奇才:)否則就是很多朋友,不然大家按的讚其實是很少的哈哈哈。
/_\, 可是偶覺得委壬要的說...
5555555..........
要多來看, 多點, 多回文誒.