@giccho, You can't expect when just starting for it to be perfect. That's like expecting to play a guitar as well as Metallica right off the bat. Writing takes years to learn. You can only go up from here!

@giccho Hi! ^.^
I know the feeling but the way to improve is like Robintvale mentioned, just keep writing and never give up. I went the same sort of hardship from self-doubt to meager amount of readers. Every writer started out small but those that never gave up and saw where to improve or practice grow great.
Above all, you write for yourself and no one else. If you aim to impress others, it doesn't end well.
Cheers and good luck in your story! ^.^

@robintvale, thanks. You're right. I remember my fist song I played when I picked up the guitar was twinkle twinkle little star.

@FionaDaydreamer, thank you !!