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鬼鬼
#1
各位作家好,我是新來的鬼鬼,希望各位前輩能看一下我的作品
#巧克力,並給予意見
7 years ago
Wendy,Dani,Brian
@鬼鬼, 嗨嗨你好啊!!很高興認識你ww
會去看看的ww
7 years ago
清歡
@鬼鬼, 嗯?你找我嗎?
7 years ago
鬼鬼
@Wendy,Dani,Brian, 謝謝哦,能交朋友嗎?
7 years ago
鬼鬼
@巧克力, 欸欸,沒想到我的作品和前輩撞名了,巧合😁能交朋友嗎?
7 years ago
清歡
@鬼鬼, 哈哈,真是巧啊!什麼前輩,還早勒。
好哦,從現在開始你就是我的朋友了!😁😁
7 years ago
朱諾(Juno)
@鬼鬼, 嗨嗨 我是朱諾
剛剛偷窺了一下你的文章
在這裡給點小小的意見
我覺得故事節奏有點快 再加些細節會更好
主角的心境轉折也是寫小說很重要的一部分
在這裡多加著墨 可以讓讀者更融入故事
如果我說的有冒犯到你,我先道個歉
歡迎你加入&寫作加油喔~
7 years ago
鬼鬼
@朱諾(Juno), 謝謝朱諾的回覆,我會努力改進的
7 years ago
星歿
@鬼鬼, 這個「~」最好放在問號前面呦!就標準格式來說不會擺在後面的(^__^)
新年快樂呀ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ歡迎交友
7 years ago
鬼鬼
@星歿, 謝謝😆
7 years ago
星歿
@鬼鬼, 不會不會ˊ>w</一起加油吧
7 years ago
Wendy,Dani,Brian
@鬼鬼, 噗哧,當然,但其實我很不會给意見,不過加油ww想聊天可以找我w
7 years ago
鬼鬼
@Wendy,Dani,Brian, 嘻嘻,謝謝
7 years ago
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#巧克力,並給予意見
會去看看的ww
好哦,從現在開始你就是我的朋友了!😁😁
剛剛偷窺了一下你的文章
在這裡給點小小的意見
我覺得故事節奏有點快 再加些細節會更好
主角的心境轉折也是寫小說很重要的一部分
在這裡多加著墨 可以讓讀者更融入故事
如果我說的有冒犯到你,我先道個歉
歡迎你加入&寫作加油喔~
新年快樂呀ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ歡迎交友