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首次挑戰愛情小說跪求高人指點qwq
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星歿
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http://www.penana.com/story/12788/沒有他的未來/issue/1
這是之前創作挑戰完就閒置已久的坑( ノдˋ;)雖說是短篇(?)小說,歷經四年來棄坑無數如今總算出了個完結篇窩還是豪感動rrrr一周下來的爆肝人生也值得了(跪泣
接下來會慢慢把後續放上來,不要問我為什麼不一次放😜我絕對不會說我想吊讀者們的胃口(遭踹飛##
以前都寫奇幻,愛情的部分可能沒有很好,日後也請多多指教了uwu
我記得這裡愛情的寫手很多吶!各位盡管給狠評,咱是強化玻璃心www(欸
7 years ago
四十四步
@星歿大,加油餒∼
7 years ago
星歿
@四十四步,謝謝你><我會努力的
7 years ago
四十四步
@星歿, 我覺得可以試著用第一人稱的寫法寫寫看喔!因為第一人稱比較著重於內心的角色以及情感的編織,第三人稱比較注重劇情'描述等,也許會比較有愛情小說的感覺∼XD
7 years ago
星歿
@四十四步, 謝謝你的建議❤
不過呀qwq長期以第三人稱創作的我幾乎沒有寫第一人稱的經驗……假若哪天練成了必來嘗試XDDDD
(是說可以不用加"大"啦XDDD可以直接叫我小星小歿不用太拘束XDDD
7 years ago
四十四步
@星歿, 好喔!小星XD,練成了記得跟我說嘿∼
7 years ago
星歿
@四十四步, 哈哈好歐好歐XDDD
7 years ago
幾時茗月
指點我最會了!
我..指著某處...點點點點..............(被拍飛!
7 years ago
星歿
@幾時茗月, 哪裡??哪裡??(找眼睛←此人近視
7 years ago
幾時茗月
@星歿, 鉛筆太小點是吧,我換[好神拖]來點,夠大了吧!
我再點點點......(你滾去認真賞文! 啪!......再度飛ㄌ。
7 years ago
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這是之前創作挑戰完就閒置已久的坑( ノдˋ;)雖說是短篇(?)小說,歷經四年來棄坑無數如今總算出了個完結篇窩還是豪感動rrrr一周下來的爆肝人生也值得了(跪泣
接下來會慢慢把後續放上來,不要問我為什麼不一次放😜我絕對不會說我想吊讀者們的胃口(遭踹飛##
以前都寫奇幻,愛情的部分可能沒有很好,日後也請多多指教了uwu
我記得這裡愛情的寫手很多吶!各位盡管給狠評,咱是強化玻璃心www(欸
不過呀qwq長期以第三人稱創作的我幾乎沒有寫第一人稱的經驗……假若哪天練成了必來嘗試XDDDD
(是說可以不用加"大"啦XDDD可以直接叫我小星小歿不用太拘束XDDD
我..指著某處...點點點點..............(被拍飛!
我再點點點......(你滾去認真賞文! 啪!......再度飛ㄌ。