There are two POVs, it is in it's first draft. For a sypnosis, please check it out on my page... it is the only work there at the moment. Anyways, it is my first horror/crime novel (my first non fantasy or dystopian, honestly) and I am always looking for feedback.
@Ducky, You need to change the story settings to allow a collaborative form. You can do it by going to 'edit story info' and selecting the type and number of collaborators you want there.