Name: James
Title of Piece: Acolytes: A Caste for Control
Genre(s): Science Fiction, Dystopia, Action, Young Adult, Military
Link: https://www.penana.com/story/1290/acolytes-a-caste-for-control/toc
Rating: PG - PG13+
Summary/Description: Check the link above.
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: Plot holes, Characters, other issues you notice
Preferred Form of Communication: Penana or email
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: Email.
Deadline: None.
I'm happy to trade critiques. My story is 86K, so I'm willing to critique stories of similar length. I prefer Science Fiction, but I'm open-minded. I generally take a couple of months to get feedback to you, so I would expect a similar response.
Title of Piece: Acolytes: A Caste for Control
Genre(s): Science Fiction, Dystopia, Action, Young Adult, Military
Link: https://www.penana.com/story/1290/acolytes-a-caste-for-control/toc
Rating: PG - PG13+
Summary/Description: Check the link above.
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: Plot holes, Characters, other issues you notice
Preferred Form of Communication: Penana or email
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: Email.
Deadline: None.
I'm happy to trade critiques. My story is 86K, so I'm willing to critique stories of similar length. I prefer Science Fiction, but I'm open-minded. I generally take a couple of months to get feedback to you, so I would expect a similar response.
PM me for my email.