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季痕
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我是新手,不知道自己寫的是否很好,可否請各位大大幫忙我看看?如果可以,可以給我一點指教嗎?謝謝!不方便的話也沒關係的......
7 years ago
星歿
@季痕, 哦哦好像有希臘神話的味道(×)我也是寫神話的( ˊ∇ˋ)ノ
對話方面.......基本上沒問題,不過你可以多描述些周遭環境,不然只有對話會給人一種.......平面的感覺(?)
抱歉,本人是很不擅幫人評文😂
7 years ago
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對話方面.......基本上沒問題,不過你可以多描述些周遭環境,不然只有對話會給人一種.......平面的感覺(?)
抱歉,本人是很不擅幫人評文😂