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這是小思寫的故事的第一章,而主要是描寫人的,所以想請前輩們給我這新手一些意見,請盡量批評!
http://www.penana.com/story/8828/%E5%B8%83%E4%BD%A9%E8%92%82%E5%8D%A1%E5%82%B3/issue/4
7 years ago
重新再來&夏
@小思, 你有一個跟我以前一樣的問題,那就是排版,排版如果不清楚,有些人會看不懂,除了這個,其他挑不出什麼問題。
繼續加油,你形容的都非常好。
我是新手第二級,所以如果有冒犯你的地方,我非常抱歉。
7 years ago
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http://www.penana.com/story/8828/%E5%B8%83%E4%BD%A9%E8%92%82%E5%8D%A1%E5%82%B3/issue/4
繼續加油,你形容的都非常好。
我是新手第二級,所以如果有冒犯你的地方,我非常抱歉。