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怎麼表現出人物很悲傷痛苦的感覺
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我是業餘的所以提出的建議幾乎可以忽略不看。
可以描寫角色所在的環境,在情緒影響下對環境的反應不同常人。(例如:手上拿著一支煙,就拿著不抽。即便已經燒到手指也沒反應……之類的。聽到救護車的警鈴,就下意識追著車跑。)
「我靜靜地看著湖面,既沒有悲傷、也沒有煩惱。
就只是凝視……。
直到我回神,我已然在湖中浸泡了。」
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可以描寫角色所在的環境,在情緒影響下對環境的反應不同常人。(例如:手上拿著一支煙,就拿著不抽。即便已經燒到手指也沒反應……之類的。聽到救護車的警鈴,就下意識追著車跑。)
「我靜靜地看著湖面,既沒有悲傷、也沒有煩惱。
就只是凝視……。
直到我回神,我已然在湖中浸泡了。」