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怎麼表現出人物很悲傷痛苦的感覺
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先寫幾個想哭卻又有著不能在他人面前掉淚的矜持,再寫淚水不自覺掉出來,然後笑著哭(概念就是讓將死之人談生命,讓悲傷之人談快樂),然後炸一堆第一人稱心理描寫之後再大哭,我是這樣做的,我寫過之後都不敢再看,超痛。流水帳的話可以讓角色遇到不同面向的事件,反思的時候又和一開始的痛苦做連結,看起來重複性就不會太高。
2 months ago
小魚一尾
謝謝,我試試看
感覺第一種比較好用,我超容易流水帳的
2 months ago
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感覺第一種比較好用,我超容易流水帳的