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VIA
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以開首來說要讓人容易讀,大概都是盡量減少和現在進行劇情不相關的設定說明……我覺得基本東西在出版書藉中大概都有做到,可以試試從這方面去看別人是怎麼做(網路小說當然也有做得很好的,但這邊要自己找……如果還不清楚大概的標準找到的書未必準確)
另外風格平坦不平坦,輕鬆不輕鬆和小學生文筆沒有直接關係。
用詞嚴肅與否和用不用口語這些就看你想營造什麼世界觀,吸引什麼觀眾?例如香港口語想吸台灣觀眾大概是行不通的,注音文想香港人看懂也很難。
如果說不想花太多腦汁其實也可以寫簡單點的故事,簡單並不等於不精彩。
2 months ago
笙笙不息
@VIA, 早幾天我朋友也說到,現在的人好像很著重故事想要傳達的訊息,從立意反推故事是否精彩,從而否定故事精彩立意普通的故事。並非說立意高深不好,只是這種風氣起初令我卻步,我這種閱歷不夠深的萌新很擔心自己寫出來會被嫌棄不夠深度⋯不過我覺得這件事本出於興趣,現在沒那麼介懷了!謝謝大佬XD
1 month ago
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另外風格平坦不平坦,輕鬆不輕鬆和小學生文筆沒有直接關係。
用詞嚴肅與否和用不用口語這些就看你想營造什麼世界觀,吸引什麼觀眾?例如香港口語想吸台灣觀眾大概是行不通的,注音文想香港人看懂也很難。
如果說不想花太多腦汁其實也可以寫簡單點的故事,簡單並不等於不精彩。