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笙笙不息
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我看了很多什麼「新手常犯錯誤」,一般都是先指責像我這些菜鳥描寫太多對話太多(水文)
但我又發現有些人比較著重文筆,總結過後我感覺所謂好文筆就是簡潔俐落,偶然用點好字。
到底如何才能把握好分寸吸引讀者看下去?一般都是開局稍稍交代背景後直接引入衝突:D 想聽聽大家的經驗
此外,個人本來寫作調子很平坦低沉,但近年來感覺輕鬆的風格更易入口,卻不喜歡被認為小學生文筆()
而且有時候覺得因為是網絡讀物所以在用詞上不需要過於嚴肅,適當的時候喜歡摻點口語和不太尷尬的網絡用詞(感覺讀起來比較沒有距離感XD)
這樣對於閱讀體驗有很大影響嗎?主要除了喜歡用輕鬆的調子慢慢帶出沉重的故事外,我也不想讀者下班放學後要絞盡腦汁讀過於精雕繁複的內容⋯
(雖然還是很容易想要把細節都放上去啦,所以寫完不斷刪減:D)
感謝 感覺下來這裡的人都很友善溫暖
3 months ago
萌鼠
@笙笙不息, 同感,想把握好故事的細膩度和讀者接受度,真的XD🤣
1 month ago
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但我又發現有些人比較著重文筆,總結過後我感覺所謂好文筆就是簡潔俐落,偶然用點好字。
到底如何才能把握好分寸吸引讀者看下去?一般都是開局稍稍交代背景後直接引入衝突:D 想聽聽大家的經驗
此外,個人本來寫作調子很平坦低沉,但近年來感覺輕鬆的風格更易入口,卻不喜歡被認為小學生文筆()
而且有時候覺得因為是網絡讀物所以在用詞上不需要過於嚴肅,適當的時候喜歡摻點口語和不太尷尬的網絡用詞(感覺讀起來比較沒有距離感XD)
這樣對於閱讀體驗有很大影響嗎?主要除了喜歡用輕鬆的調子慢慢帶出沉重的故事外,我也不想讀者下班放學後要絞盡腦汁讀過於精雕繁複的內容⋯
(雖然還是很容易想要把細節都放上去啦,所以寫完不斷刪減:D)
感謝 感覺下來這裡的人都很友善溫暖