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劍狂燕飛
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看你是編寫那部份的,如果是人物的純互動,除了對話之外,還有神態,肢體語言,動作,心理描寫部份,以及每個人思考方式,大概就這些。
如果是武打部份,當下環境,襯托氣氛,衝突,動機,最後才是比武較勁,可以設於假設的方式,去了解人物當下想法?然後再加以點綴加大衝突力道。
而細節部份就看要不要寫個詳細了,以我來說的話,我通常一場武打戲都會寫得適中,主要是把那種絕望感,壓迫感,寫出來,畢竟每個人編寫方式都不相同,就用擅於文筆去編寫就好。
以上皆是個人經驗談,僅作參考。
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如果是武打部份,當下環境,襯托氣氛,衝突,動機,最後才是比武較勁,可以設於假設的方式,去了解人物當下想法?然後再加以點綴加大衝突力道。
而細節部份就看要不要寫個詳細了,以我來說的話,我通常一場武打戲都會寫得適中,主要是把那種絕望感,壓迫感,寫出來,畢竟每個人編寫方式都不相同,就用擅於文筆去編寫就好。
以上皆是個人經驗談,僅作參考。