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綠木柚子(ゆず)
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如果當下只「對白」可以讓讀的人看的出角色講話的神態或是心思
那我覺得只要有對白就夠
相反的如果光只有「對白」還不足以讓人進入那個情景
我就會覺得加上動作描寫,可以讓對的白呈現更加細膩
又有時候有些場景也是無聲勝有聲……像18X(誤)、或是武戲
這時候就不一定需要有什麼對白
所以我個人是會不太在意,因為文字都是相輔相成構成的
基本上只要都讀得順暢、可以讓人進入劇情就可以了
1 year ago
夏夏
我會注意的!謝謝啦
1 year ago
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那我覺得只要有對白就夠
相反的如果光只有「對白」還不足以讓人進入那個情景
我就會覺得加上動作描寫,可以讓對的白呈現更加細膩
又有時候有些場景也是無聲勝有聲……像18X(誤)、或是武戲
這時候就不一定需要有什麼對白
所以我個人是會不太在意,因為文字都是相輔相成構成的
基本上只要都讀得順暢、可以讓人進入劇情就可以了