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新作品或新手會不會擔心太多字,會勸退讀者?
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Oct.Win
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看開場第一章能不能抓住讀者,如果抓得住,就會繼續看下去。後面的話就看事件的鋪成和編排,如果字數過多,都只是講一些不著邊際的話,很容易讓讀者流失興趣。但如果中間能安排一些讓讀者有所感觸的劇情,或是特殊事件讓讀者驚喜,就可以抓住他們。
我的小說也都是很多字,所以都會用場景或事件作分段,而且分段之後依然很多。其實我有考慮過把章節字數再縮短,可是這樣感覺又會打斷節奏,所以索性就照著自己的節奏寫了。
2 years ago
Sonia
@Oct.Win, 謝謝你的回應~但有時候即便讀者有興趣,但在這3C產品盛行的年代,字數確實多少會影響到人們閱讀順序的心態,尤其非紙本閱讀,看久了其實也蠻傷神的。但是我有漸漸抓到技巧,如果時間允許,歡迎來幫我看第一章的第一段和最後一段是否有獲得你的注意🤣謝謝~新手但修改多次🥺請多指教~
https://www.penana.com/article/813101
2 years ago
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我的小說也都是很多字,所以都會用場景或事件作分段,而且分段之後依然很多。其實我有考慮過把章節字數再縮短,可是這樣感覺又會打斷節奏,所以索性就照著自己的節奏寫了。
https://www.penana.com/article/813101