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艾雅
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多看書之餘,可以模仿一下他人的描寫方法(不是抄襲,不要誤會)
既然樓主希望放出一段參考,那我就恭敬不如從命放一段吧
「喵喵。」小貓咪用力搖了搖頭,指著前方的大型鞦韆,快速跑向那個鞦韆。
「咦?等等我!是你的主人嗎?」月追了上去,貓咪跑步的速度比她想得還要快,她費了些力氣才追到鞦韆前,發現小貓咪居然跑到別人身上去撒嬌。
坐在鞦韆椅上的是個非常漂亮的男生,年紀看起來和她差不多,有著一頭亞麻色短髮,金色雙眸,五官端正,氣質陰柔,皮膚白皙。羅佩亞的男性大多到十六、七歲,身高通常會超過一百七十公分,有的甚至會高到一百八十公分,但是少年的身高似乎不到一百七十公分,相比其他男生,身材矮小了些。
月總覺得似乎在哪裡見過這名少年,她摸了一下掛在脖子上的彎月型鑽石項鍊,又看了少年好幾眼,隨即搖了搖頭。
「怎麽了嗎?」少年說話的聲音宛如天籟,清冷卻有磁性,彷彿能讓女性耳朵懷孕。
「啊……那個……這隻貓咪是你養的嗎?」
「不是。」少年抓起貓咪,打量著這隻小貓,「看起來才出生一、兩個月,沒有項圈,可能是暑假期間把結界關掉時闖進來的野貓,放著不管也會被警衛趕出去吧。」
2 years ago
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@艾雅, 謝謝
我試試從聲音、身高年紀著手看看
2 years ago
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既然樓主希望放出一段參考,那我就恭敬不如從命放一段吧
「喵喵。」小貓咪用力搖了搖頭,指著前方的大型鞦韆,快速跑向那個鞦韆。
「咦?等等我!是你的主人嗎?」月追了上去,貓咪跑步的速度比她想得還要快,她費了些力氣才追到鞦韆前,發現小貓咪居然跑到別人身上去撒嬌。
坐在鞦韆椅上的是個非常漂亮的男生,年紀看起來和她差不多,有著一頭亞麻色短髮,金色雙眸,五官端正,氣質陰柔,皮膚白皙。羅佩亞的男性大多到十六、七歲,身高通常會超過一百七十公分,有的甚至會高到一百八十公分,但是少年的身高似乎不到一百七十公分,相比其他男生,身材矮小了些。
月總覺得似乎在哪裡見過這名少年,她摸了一下掛在脖子上的彎月型鑽石項鍊,又看了少年好幾眼,隨即搖了搖頭。
「怎麽了嗎?」少年說話的聲音宛如天籟,清冷卻有磁性,彷彿能讓女性耳朵懷孕。
「啊……那個……這隻貓咪是你養的嗎?」
「不是。」少年抓起貓咪,打量著這隻小貓,「看起來才出生一、兩個月,沒有項圈,可能是暑假期間把結界關掉時闖進來的野貓,放著不管也會被警衛趕出去吧。」
我試試從聲音、身高年紀著手看看