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owl
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如何描寫人物,包刮長相、衣著、個性、第一印象等,讓讀者可以明確知道「他(她)」是怎麼樣的人或「看起來」是怎麼樣的人?
請放上自創的角色情節,描寫第一人稱女主第一眼見到「他(她)」的經過
謝謝大家
2 years ago
Porpoise
@owl, 嗯⋯不用一次寫出來,而是慢慢的讓角色在故事裡「演」出來。讀者比想像中的聰明,只要你敘述的通暢,絕對可以「讓讀者明確知道角色是怎麼樣的人」。
至於,貼自己的角色情節,我面子有點薄⋯不好意思😅
2 years ago
owl
@Porpoise, 所以還是多練練文筆對吧
感謝你
2 years ago
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請放上自創的角色情節,描寫第一人稱女主第一眼見到「他(她)」的經過
謝謝大家
至於,貼自己的角色情節,我面子有點薄⋯不好意思😅
感謝你