It's a dystopian short story. I don't have the world's best grammar, so if you just so happen to have good grammar, please help! I am looking for any kind of criticism, but grammar, Sentance structure, and other similar things is what I'm most worried about.
Also, I want to known if this would make an interesting novel or not.
Also, I want to known if this would make an interesting novel or not.
Thanks so much!