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Cynderz
It was good to see Damon's temperament towards how he was being treated since becoming the son of the late Grim. I would assume the change would be quite agitating with people expecting him to be just like his father. It was good to hear that most of the population survived the winter and I rather enjoyed Faldo entering the role of leadership. I am curious though, what season is it now? It could be nice to hear just how many months have passed since the disappearance of Grim
Dlofc84
It is early spring, I had it wrote in and somewhere in the rewrites, it got edited out. If I remember right, the ones I pass the chapter off too said it was repetitive information. "The warm wind blowing off the swamp" was all they needed. Do you think minimum it should at least say in that same sentence something about early spring?
Cynderz
@Dlofc84,Maybe try something along the lines of "The warm spring-time..."
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