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故事寫得不錯，但...除了刺蝟，另外兩個算不上主題吧 ?

3 years ago

三個題目都有出現在故事裡啊，所謂的三題故事就是有出現指定的三個詞來串起故事就可以了，或者你有更好的建議也可以提出來

3 years ago

@不死妖怪, 當初在三題故事的介紹時，是說「以三個詞語為主題」吧？
「有出現」...應該不等於「主題」

3 years ago

@孤蟻,我是覺得三者的戲份比重差不多的，刺蝟是故事起因的受害者，彈床是主角藉以趕路的展開，溫水煮蛙是故事轉點的謀略，不知你覺得哪裡有問題

3 years ago

@孤蟻,感謝指正錯誤，應該是以三個詞語為故事核心才對

3 years ago

@不死妖怪,對。

3 years ago

@孤蟻,已更正創挑題目，謝謝

3 years ago

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