I liked this chapter..it was really cute when Mark asked Ryan about the clothes as he forgot to give them to him, and I like ketchup on eggs too, especially when I was small! :') I'd like to ask, is the voice in italics towards the end of the chapter a new character (who isn't introduced in the story yet)? Thank you!
@onceuponastar Oh yes. That's a new character alright. *childish giggling* I'm glad you were able to connect to the characters like that! It's splendid to hear.