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雖然作者筆下的角色戴爾樂有開解鬼魂的心結,
但我絲毫看不到有任何情感上的演繹,
懺悔者說愛上了哥哥的未婚妻,但作者並沒有在故事中展露這種情感,
就算之後講到他後悔,我都無法從作者的文字中感受到這種情緒,
所以只能奉上解開鬼魂心結的20蕉幣( ‧᷄ὢ‧᷅ )
題外話,我蠻喜歡作者的文字,帶給我一種很舒服的感覺,
如果添加上情感演繹的部分,相信整篇的感覺會更加豐富(。・ω・。)ノ
3 years ago
琉璃異色貓
多謝創主用心點評,也很高興你喜歡我的文字(//▽//)
3 years ago
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但我絲毫看不到有任何情感上的演繹,
懺悔者說愛上了哥哥的未婚妻,但作者並沒有在故事中展露這種情感,
就算之後講到他後悔,我都無法從作者的文字中感受到這種情緒,
所以只能奉上解開鬼魂心結的20蕉幣( ‧᷄ὢ‧᷅ )
題外話,我蠻喜歡作者的文字,帶給我一種很舒服的感覺,
如果添加上情感演繹的部分,相信整篇的感覺會更加豐富(。・ω・。)ノ