As a female myself, I do have a few critiques of this piece. First off, I do think you seem to overlook one of the main purposes of a scrupulous dress code, and that is to enforce the idea that there is a place and a time to dress a certain way. Once you get to the workforce, dress codes are ubiquitous, therefore, it makes sense for schools to expect a certain level of decorum in the way their students dress. Obviously, I'd agree that the code ought to be enforced equally among both sexes, I just think boys/ men seem to run into less trouble with a dress code because most men's style seems to be more conservative anyway. Second, you seem to imply that men or people in generel possess the ability to control their thoughts or consciousness. This just is not true. Sexual thoughts in particular are controlled by the amygdala of the limbic system, one of the most primitive parts of the brain. Therefore, we possess very little control our these thoughts. To imply that it is the boy's fault for having sexual thoughts is just psychologically and cognitively incorrect, very puritan, and destructive for a young boy's esteem as well. Obviously, yes, behavior can be controlled and if a boy chooses to act on these thoughts, that is completely his fault. Therefore, to expect a level of decorum and modesty from both men and women among a school dress code is important. After all, school is to learn. This is one of the reasons why many dress codes prevent religious/ political symbols to be worn because it is not the time or place to wear such. Third, you are obviously very passionate. But before you published this, I would advise looking over your spelling and grammar. It takes away from your ethos as a writer. Same for all the obscenities, a lot of readers may see it as sophomoric. Good work though!
First off, I do think you seem to overlook one of the main purposes of a scrupulous dress code, and that is to enforce the idea that there is a place and a time to dress a certain way. Once you get to the workforce, dress codes are ubiquitous, therefore, it makes sense for schools to expect a certain level of decorum in the way their students dress. Obviously, I'd agree that the code ought to be enforced equally among both sexes, I just think boys/ men seem to run into less trouble with a dress code because most men's style seems to be more conservative anyway.
Second, you seem to imply that men or people in generel possess the ability to control their thoughts or consciousness. This just is not true. Sexual thoughts in particular are controlled by the amygdala of the limbic system, one of the most primitive parts of the brain. Therefore, we possess very little control our these thoughts. To imply that it is the boy's fault for having sexual thoughts is just psychologically and cognitively incorrect, very puritan, and destructive for a young boy's esteem as well. Obviously, yes, behavior can be controlled and if a boy chooses to act on these thoughts, that is completely his fault. Therefore, to expect a level of decorum and modesty from both men and women among a school dress code is important. After all, school is to learn. This is one of the reasons why many dress codes prevent religious/ political symbols to be worn because it is not the time or place to wear such.
Third, you are obviously very passionate. But before you published this, I would advise looking over your spelling and grammar. It takes away from your ethos as a writer. Same for all the obscenities, a lot of readers may see it as sophomoric. Good work though!