As I told you before, this story looks like it'll be good. As @RachaelMole mentioned, some of it is a little confusing (and there is a considerable amount of grammatical errors), but overall I really like the prose. The story is really interesting, too. I like that you have robots and humans more or less coexisting, though maybe not so much coexisting because there seems to be a war and whatnot, haha. I also really like the cover art. :)