This was written well. Brought little details in but enough to make you wonder. I suggest you keep the atmosphere by being careful with the words you choose. If you are going for the eerie feel, sometimes less is more. The more you leave stuff out, the more your readers would be kept in the dark wondering and imagining things for themselves.
omg. you read my story! (*fangirl scream*) thank you.
I'll keep that in mind, thank you so much :D your feedback means a lot! I need a lot of improving and work before this story is even halfway decent. THANKS :D
I'll keep that in mind, thank you so much :D your feedback means a lot! I need a lot of improving and work before this story is even halfway decent. THANKS :D