When I first read this, I thought Aria was a talking cat because of where Aria was mentioned in between the dialogue of Victoria calling Wren's name. But after I read it a second time, it felt as though Wren was basically in her own world, uninterrupted, even though Victoria was calling for her. I think that's what it was? I found this sentence a bit vague: "It had been years since she had seen her body in this form." It's as though Victoria is referring to herself. I like how Wren just dances on, hearing an orchestra. There's something nice about her seeming to be carefree.
@Musesation Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I wanted to give Aria life beyond being a regular "cat rug" littered in a story. My writing flow is different, ive noticed, than other writers. Its just how the words come out of my head. I wanted to stay vague in that Victoria thought. I wanted, at that point, for readers to interpret for themselves what she meant. The info will be revealed in a subsequent chapter. Thank you again.
I found this sentence a bit vague: "It had been years since she had seen her body in this form." It's as though Victoria is referring to herself.
I like how Wren just dances on, hearing an orchestra. There's something nice about her seeming to be carefree.