I really love Damon's and Cariline's relationship. I think that the interactions between the two are very well written. I'm looking forward to seeing how they're relationship progresses (Or deteriorates if that happens)
Really the one relationship I was trying to show building here was Damon and his lost fathers. It was why I had both of them in the chapter together. I wanted to have a sense of family finally for Damon, but Damon is very attached to his Cariline. Part of the Grim side of him.