It was nice interaction between Damon and Grim, I really enjoyed it. I do have a question regarding Bethel. Is she no longer able to have desires and did she know who Thomas was? To me it seems like she has become a tool for order and nothing more. Or could this be an act to win back everyone's favour.
I meant to leave that at this point an open question. It helps with the reactions with the readers, either satisfaction for seeing a criminal brought to justice or outrage of seeing a person made into the very thing that Grim forbade. Some of my beta readers helped to tweak that part and my mother helped to polish it. Scares me how sadistic my mom can be:=P. It will be answered fully, but not until the next book. Sorry for the hang but I don't want to give away any spoilers.