Haha, they were just friends at this point. They hadn't known each other for that long, honestly, and she only went on one date. It's cute you feel so strongly about this. 

@Aretice N. Treader, I see! I'm a little worried about the ending of the story..I'm not sure if i have the courage to read on

but I really liked how you named the chapters Aretice..the flow and emotions of beyond's writing for some of the chapters are especially beautiful too :')

The chapters I liked most were '8 >> conditional' (issue 10) and 'eleven >> monomial' (issue 13)

@once upon a star, There's not a reason for you to be worried now, though, because they're together now. :) 

Thank you! I really worked hard on the chapter titles, actually. I have a whole outline and everything for them. I think I made this first part a little too long, though. :/

@Aretice N. Treader, I see! right! :') It's great that they're together now! You mean maybe this chapter is a little long?