Your descriptions of each zombie are so vivid and individualized! I really enjoy that aspect, it's not something seen often in the genre!
There are a few points that some sentences or words could be eliminated to keep up the rapid pace you are setting. It was such a strong and arresting first chapter though and the end was very intriguing!
There are a few points that some sentences or words could be eliminated to keep up the rapid pace you are setting. It was such a strong and arresting first chapter though and the end was very intriguing!