Wow, I really loved this one. It was interesting and couldn't wait to know what would happen. I liked the way you wrapped up the story but I want more. No! I need more. This was great. I want to say more but this whole comment would end up with me babbling on about what I enjoyed and it might get annoying.
Haha. Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this story.I'm working on some experimental pieces, it may be a while before I post a story with this specific writing style. Anyways, Thanks again. xD