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but please, I'm begging you, calm your punctuation down. Almost every single one of those em-dashes and semi-colons can be replaced by a comma, and the ones that can't be replaced can be taken out entirely.
Keep up the good work :)
Thank you for reading this and liking it.
Haha yeah, I've noticed that problem as well. But as I'm writing I can't seem to control.
Anyway, thanks again.