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Aretice N. Treader
I've only read this first chapter so far, but I think I'll like the rest of the story already. I love the way you gave quite a bit of Puck's backstory without making the reader feel like a huge amount of info was just dumped onto them. The way you were able to tie the end of the chapter to the beginning (seemingly) effortlessly was amazing. Also, I really enjoyed the vocabulary you added in, even though I didn't get to read this story before you started revising it. (I think my own vocabulary will grow quite considerably thanks to this story.) I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of this story.
8 年前
Andrew Knight
Why, thank you very much. I think that many of the other readers will agree with me when they say it only gets better as it goes along. Thanks for checking it out, and I hope you enjoy the rest!
8 年前
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